it was made in collaboration with Monica
(I meant to say that
theoretically, a hairstyling salon
futurisimo
that shoe
of god
works hard
and no wonder
her obligations
are pressed
bread and
boring holes
in the linen
of spaced-out cat
board ahoy roar forth
driven with evinrude
powerhead bombardier
and milk the stale
devil she would like
to sew daisies
into her flesh
but honey perfume
and whole
happenstance
permits some knuckle I
hesitate to say
but that this
were a parenthesis
a bracket a boulder
she would seed
her back porch
with fig trees
and doubt
lie about
within wonder
do we insist
or should we
that
a straightforward narrative is
better
because it is
easier to understand?
what's the opposite?
or maybe that
an insistence that the abstract
is inferior because
it's not consistent
with understanding?
(as if all writing weren't
abstract)
I must be missing something in this - a hole in my logik - I'm
positive that's true that I am missing somethink
I'm tired of that poem about picking tomatoes)
the danger in your argument in favor of making the poem easier for
the audience very much resembles Thomas Higginson's rationale when
revising/regularizing "normalizing" Emily Dickinson's poems after
her death to make them more accessible for readers
he meant well but ruined the poems
what would we have if everything were "fixed" so that readers or
listeners could avoid confusion
communication in the poem might deviate from the intent no matter
how skilled the maker
words say what they will despite us
true, but I don't like to think of my poems as reduced to that -
and well - your argument supports mine - the idea of poetry as a popularity contest as - to me - to seek approval as driving the process of making - as highly unappealing -
purpose - getting a job - I don't like that idea at all
I truly believe the role of "poetry" (for lack of a better term)
has been reduced and delegitimized, sublimated to the rational -
the rational considered as "better" -
it's not - but we live in a world - a lousy one in some regards -
not of course totally lousy - because we can still find simple
beauties - but the potential of poetry is reduced by this worship
of logic - as if logic were the goal -
now why do you suppose it is? it's mistaken -
you sidestepped the issue of the abstract by the way - and I'm not
going to let you off the hook on that - it's abstract not logical
we're stuck with logic because it is a useful tool - but logic is
intrisically flawed - it's always only partial - we cannot
logically explain the world - hence the appeal to "greater" powers - whatever that, or those
and here enters poetry - or it should - but before we were born
our "culture" turned it into a commodity of exchange - and not a
very valuable commodity at that - today it's considered almost
worthless -
but it's evidence of our living more fully I believe than we would
without and shouldn't come with requirements - there's all kinds
of poems - a good thing - but I think we only see a sliver of the
potenial power of the poem - and poems can harness that power even
when nonsensical - witness abracadabras etc - the belief in seed
sounds without "known" meanings or the role of the ritual
utterance in so-called "primitive" societies -
I think you are arguing for a very narrow definition of what a
poem can be -
S
But we might additionally ask if poems are supposed to be objects
of
capital, something of exchange in a capitalist society.
How do we either use our poems as objects of trade, to establish a
career for instance.
you have used your back, kidneys eyesight and god knows what else,
hauling loads all over the highways. you've exchanged your health
for
rent, groceries and other necesseties.
if your art could secure you a teaching position or if you could
command 1500 per reading, how would that be different in intent or
resulgt than your previous occupation?